Immersion Assembly
Welcome back! Who is excited for this term? We are going to leap into writing by creating some exciting recounts about our immersion assembly!
WALT: plan for our writing
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When we plan, we need to think about:
- Who our audience is.
- How we are going hook this audience in - how are we going to capture their attention in a creative way?
- How we are going to create a description of the event which makes our audience feel like they were at the event too.
- How we are going to keep our audience interested as they read.
Step 1: Brainstorm.
What you could include:
- Descriptive words
- Ideas for a hook
- Key things you can remember from the assembly
- What you enjoyed
- What made you laugh
Step 2: Plan your own recount (double click on the drawing below).
Step 3: Write your recount!
Transition Words
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Past tense
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First...
Next...
Soon...
During…
While...
After...
Later...
At first…
Initially…
Once we…
Once I…
At last…
Finally…
In the end…
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You should be telling the audience what has already happened since we have already had Immersion Assembly!
E.g.
Watched
Had
Saw
laughed
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If you can think of any others, use them! This is just to get you started.
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When you are ready to post on your blog, use the pictures in our Pav Media Folder.
Start writing here: ON Monday we went to the hall and for a immersion assembly for this team 1 was playing snap.and team 2 was doing a song on the stage.when they were finish they did it faster and everybody was sleepe.
When team 3 was talking using songs and team 4 was doing crazy music in there car.At last the amazing team five blow my mind with their lovely movie when we wore sing let it go from frozen when the first part of the lion king.The End.
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