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Wednesday, 7 June 2017

the Taniwha.

The Taniwha
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Use descriptive words.

We are going to write 3 paragraphs (3-5 sentences) about these ideas:

-What do you see (all of the picture)?
-Describe the Taniwha.
-What can you hear/smell?

Start your writing here:
The wind was blowing the trees and the grass off the ground.  

In the distance people were screaming  and frightened  of the fierce rough skin off the taniwha.

When I heard the powerful rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr aaaaaaaaaaaa of the taniwha.  The people were covering their ears. When the people came closer to the taniwha the taniwha ate the people.

Then went back heading behind the bash.waiting for some more people to come.  

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