Antzel mihi

What’s the time Mr Wolf?

What’s the time Mr Wolf?

We are going to go outside and play a game.

Use these words above and below to help with starting your sentences.

Transition Words	Past tense
First... Next... Soon... During… While... After... Later... At first… Initially… Once we… Once I… At last… Finally… In the end…	You should be telling the audience what has already happened since we have already had Fun Racing Morning! E.g. Watched Had Saw laughed
If you can think of any others, use them! This is just to get you started.

Plan Here:

COOL WORDS:

TOPIC SENTENCES:

Paragraph 1:

P2:

Start your writing here:

Well first we explained the rules after that we went to go play the game. When we went outside we had to go to the bike track and the game  beacon. It was a challenge trying to touch mr moran back so they can be the winner but mr moran was too fast like a Security chasing a criminal that is robbing a bank and stelling. But we don’t know how won but it will be the teachers. Thank you mr moran and miss hare.

Sprint Track

Sprint Track

We have just been outside racing against our friends.

Use these words above and below to help with starting your sentences.

Transition Words	Past tense
First... Next... Soon... During… While... After... Later... At first… Initially… Once we… Once I… At last… Finally… In the end…	You should be telling the audience what has already happened since we have already had Fun Racing Morning! E.g. Watched Had Saw laughed
If you can think of any others, use them! This is just to get you started.

Plan Here:

COOL WORDS:

TOPIC SENTENCES:

Paragraph 1:

P2:

P3:

P4:

Start your writing here: first mr moran told us to line up on the deck and set down on the concrete.

When mr moran explained the girls went first sprinting for the finnish madison out of nowhere came first.

Then it was the boys is turen and mj saku and Jerry kingson came 1,2,3,4.

Then it was top 4 but there was a Change they had to crad crall and went back to class the end.

Immersion Assembly.

Immersion Assembly

Welcome back! Who is excited for this term? We are going to leap into writing by creating some exciting recounts about our immersion assembly!

WALT: plan for our writing

When we plan, we need to think about:

• Who our audience is.
• How we are going hook this audience in - how are we going to capture their attention in a creative way?
• How we are going to create a description of the event which makes our audience feel like they were at the event too.
• How we are going to keep our audience interested as they read.

Step 1: Brainstorm.

What you could include:

• Descriptive words
• Ideas for a hook
• Key things you can remember from the assembly
• What you enjoyed
• What made you laugh

Step 2: Plan your own recount (double click on the drawing below).

Step 3: Write your recount!

Transition Words	Past tense
First... Next... Soon... During… While... After... Later... At first… Initially… Once we… Once I… At last… Finally… In the end…	You should be telling the audience what has already happened since we have already had Immersion Assembly! E.g. Watched Had Saw laughed
If you can think of any others, use them! This is just to get you started.

When you are ready to post on your blog, use the pictures in our Pav Media Folder.

Start writing here: ON Monday we went to the hall and for a immersion assembly for this team 1 was playing snap.and team 2 was doing a song on the stage.when they were finish they did it faster and everybody was sleepe.

When team 3 was talking using songs and team 4 was doing crazy music in there car.At last the amazing team five blow my mind with their lovely movie when we wore sing let it go from frozen when the first part of the lion king.The End.

my rocket ship.

My rocket ship special powers are lasers to protect me from aliens.It looks  like lasers that boots out flames.The lasers shoots out lasers like a Machine gun that looks like a gun that shoots aliens.Well the boosters looks like a blue flame boosters. The engine looks like a car engine.

Well as I was boarding  my rocket ship I step onto my hover board. It will take me up into my rocket. And in five seconds I blast off into space.when the  t star sparkling and light the thruster. When I blast off I look up.

When I saw a lot of clouds I shut my eyes and I was in space. Well I went to the Moon it took me 3 days in 9 months and I put a cook island flag on the Moon. when I came back everybody was clapping for me. Well when I was at home I got a gold medal.

Cross Country

Cross Country

It is important to remember to catch your reader’s attention when you  writing and to hold it using descriptive details that are interesting.

Spend some time thinking about how you felt at the beginning of the Cross Country race, while you were waiting for Mr. Burt to yell “GO!”

Using this sentence starter, begin writing here:

As I stood at the starting line, waiting for Mr. Burt to yell “Go,”  I felt as if…  when I was running I have butterflies in my stomach and I was very nervous  I felt like running home and as I was  could come first Whenever it comes to cost country  I feel like throwing up.

dictation

The amount of the moon that you see from earth depends how much of it is lit up by the sun. this amount changes each day. The phases of the moon  depends on its position in relation to the sun and earth.As the moon’s makes its way around the earth we see the bright part of the surface at different angles. Theses are called phases]of the moon. It takes 29 days for the moon to orbit around the earth.

The frog

Start your writing here:Gripping onto the tree out comes the tongue. Slimy green skin big wobbly wide eyes.when he see the big cricket he waiting for it to stop.Then his tongue comes out and the cricket gets eaten alive never to be seen again.

batman.

last week I Finnish the diamond so today I am reading BATMAN!!.
Billionaire Bruce Wayne was sitting in study of Wayne manor. He is reading his favourite book. Suddenly, the Bat-Signal appears! There is  trouble in Gotham city and the police needs Batman's help. and it's was joker and his crow.

the diamond.

When he saw her he hit his head hard on a table went how did I fall.When he woke up he went home and went to sleep. In the morning he got up and got ready for work.and went in his car to work when he got there there were no cars only him so he went back home and the door was open and he went in he!!! got cached and never to be Sean  again.

yoyo's.

This is a paragraph about a yoyo.

This yoyo was used in the ancient times. When the yoyo is used for  different ways to play with like doing tricks like the doggy walk that made the kids happy.

kite day.

kite day

You are going to write a recount about what happened yesterday when we made our kites.

Start your writing here:

Letter yesterday we went to fly kites.

First we run to the park when we got there some  got tingled in the firefox.latter when the bell went back to class.when we got back to class we got our lunch and sit down on the mat.latter after the school news we went to play.

the Taniwha.

The Taniwha

Use descriptive words.

We are going to write 3 paragraphs (3-5 sentences) about these ideas:

-What do you see (all of the picture)?

-Describe the Taniwha.

-What can you hear/smell?

Start your writing here:

The wind was blowing the trees and the grass off the ground.  

In the distance people were screaming  and frightened  of the fierce rough skin off the taniwha.

When I heard the powerful rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr aaaaaaaaaaaa of the taniwha.  The people were covering their ears. When the people came closer to the taniwha the taniwha ate the people.

Then went back heading behind the bash.waiting for some more people to come.  

Describing a Maori Village

describing a waka voyage

The world smallest drgon

The world’s smallest dragon gets its name because it is called that because it is as small as a cat.

It has sharp claws as a knives.                                                                       

It also has spiky horns.

When it breaths fire that means.

If I had one I would call it smokey.   

It would live wild.

We would be playing all day long,then we’ll go to bed but I put smokey in it cage.