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Monday 30 October 2017

magic number

What’s the time Mr Wolf?

What’s the time Mr Wolf?

We are going to go outside and play a game.

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Use these words above and below to help with starting your sentences.

Transition Words
Past tense
First...
Next...
Soon...
During…
While...
After...
Later...
At first…
Initially…
Once we…
Once I…
At last…
Finally…
In the end…
You should be telling the audience what has already happened since we have already had Fun Racing Morning!

E.g.
Watched
Had
Saw
laughed
If you can think of any others, use them! This is just to get you started.

Plan Here:
COOL WORDS:
TOPIC SENTENCES:
Paragraph 1:
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Start your writing here:

Well first we explained the rules after that we went to go play the game. When we went outside we had to go to the bike track and the game  beacon. It was a challenge trying to touch mr moran back so they can be the winner but mr moran was too fast like a Security chasing a criminal that is robbing a bank and stelling. But we don’t know how won but it will be the teachers. Thank you mr moran and miss hare.

Thursday 26 October 2017

Sprint Track

Sprint Track

We have just been outside racing against our friends.

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Use these words above and below to help with starting your sentences.

Transition Words
Past tense
First...
Next...
Soon...
During…
While...
After...
Later...
At first…
Initially…
Once we…
Once I…
At last…
Finally…
In the end…
You should be telling the audience what has already happened since we have already had Fun Racing Morning!

E.g.
Watched
Had
Saw
laughed
If you can think of any others, use them! This is just to get you started.

Plan Here:
COOL WORDS:
TOPIC SENTENCES:
Paragraph 1:
P2:
P3:
P4:




Start your writing here: first mr moran told us to line up on the deck and set down on the concrete.
When mr moran explained the girls went first sprinting for the finnish madison out of nowhere came first.
Then it was the boys is turen and mj saku and Jerry kingson came 1,2,3,4.

Then it was top 4 but there was a Change they had to crad crall and went back to class the end.

Tuesday 24 October 2017

magic number

captain underpants

  when the horrible zombie nerd raised his foot again, all that remained was a red squishy stain. and that dear readers,  is the unfortunate end of the captain underpants saga.

Friday 20 October 2017

Immersion Assembly.

Immersion Assembly

Welcome back! Who is excited for this term? We are going to leap into writing by creating some exciting recounts about our immersion assembly!
WALT: plan for our writing

When we plan, we need to think about:
  • Who our audience is.
  • How we are going hook this audience in - how are we going to capture their attention in a creative way?
  • How we are going to create a description of the event which makes our audience feel like they were at the event too.
  • How we are going to keep our audience interested as they read.

Step 1: Brainstorm.
What you could include:
  • Descriptive words
  • Ideas for a hook
  • Key things you can remember from the assembly
    • What you enjoyed
    • What made you laugh

Step 2: Plan your own recount (double click on the drawing below).

Step 3: Write your recount!
Transition Words
Past tense
First...
Next...
Soon...
During…
While...
After...
Later...
At first…
Initially…
Once we…
Once I…
At last…
Finally…
In the end…
You should be telling the audience what has already happened since we have already had Immersion Assembly!

E.g.
Watched
Had
Saw
laughed
If you can think of any others, use them! This is just to get you started.
When you are ready to post on your blog, use the pictures in our Pav Media Folder.

Start writing here: ON Monday we went to the hall and for a immersion assembly for this team 1 was playing snap.and team 2 was doing a song on the stage.when they were finish they did it faster and everybody was sleepe.

When team 3 was talking using songs and team 4 was doing crazy music in there car.At last the amazing team five blow my mind with their lovely movie when we wore sing let it go from frozen when the first part of the lion king.The End.