Wednesday, 6 June 2018

the bucket.

Once upon a time There was bees that were really thirsty but some of them were floating in the bucket some was flying and coming for a seip. And then came along two really thirsty birds they were sitting on the rim off the bucket and putting there short beck to drink.

There was a rabbit that was thirsty and he climbed up the bucket to get a drink.then there was a big donkey and he saw the bucket of water so he walked offer to it and had a sip .then came a huge bull that was dirty and drank almost all of the water.then came along two rosters that was thirsty so they put their mouth in for a drink.

today we had to show what we can write we have 40 minutes to write without talking to others.we were able to work quietly to complete the task.

Thursday, 31 May 2018

Choose It Narrative

Choose It Narrative

Today you will be writing a narrative. In order to help you get started, we selected some pictures for you to use in your writing. You must use ONE picture.

When you have decided which picture you want to use, delete the other 3 and enlarge the picture you have chosen.

Don’t forget! A narrative needs to have a beginning, middle and an end. It also needs to have a problem (conflict) that is solved (resolved) by the end of the story.

Image Attribution:
  1. Jetlev Jetpack, By Seg9585 [CC BY 3.0 (], via Wikimedia Commons

Begin Writing Here:

Once upon a time there was a man could maickel he love too water jet.

One time he saw some people that were water jetting so he ask if he could have a turn so they said yes but he forgot how to waterjet and he almost drowned and so he came back up to surface and told them to drop him back to land.