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FiaFia


Recount

WALT: recount a moment in time.
WALT: structure our writing into paragraphs.

Your task
Write about the moment you waited at the side of the stage ready to perform for Fia Fia and then your performance on the stage.

  • What did you do?
  • How did you feel?
  • What did you see while you waited at the side of the stage?
  • What did you see while you were on the stage?

PLANNING: You now have 5 minutes to add the key words to your plan.  Do not write any sentences in the boxes below.

Orientation (Introduction): How will you hook the reader?
Who?pt england school.
What? fiafia.
Where?on the school field.
When?at night 7 o'clock
BODY: Describe what happened.
Paragraph 2 (3-4 sentences)
What happened while you waited at the side of the stage, ready to go on?we got every sing

How did you feel while you waited at the side of the stage?

What did you see and hear while you were on the stage?
Paragraph 3 (3-4 sentences)
What happened while you were on the stage?

How did you feel while you were on the stage?

What did you see and hear while you were on the stage?
Paragraph 4 (3-4 sentences)
What happened once you had left the stage?no

How did you feel after you had left the stage?

What did you see and hear after you left the stage?
Conclusion (Summary)
How did you feel after performing at Fia Fia?good

Would you want to do it again?yes
Thursday

Now that you have made a plan, it is time to write your recount in full sentences:
Last term on Thursday night it was FiaFia we had to dance I  was in the Fiji group before us was hip hop and I liked all of the groups. I had stage fright when we got ready to go onto the stage. My Favorited is the Samoa group.

Miss West's and Mrs Moala's Experiment

Friday, 4 May 2018